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Here’s my result for #4. I listened to all three songs this morning. The result: A 300-word microfiction (horror?) story!

The murky water glinted in Octavia’s eye. A fish splashed, another jumped. She was ready to jump. Jump into the swampy river, make her escape. That’s it. Boom. Splash.

Soon it could all be over. An alligator would grab her leg, pull her under. Maybe the world would spin and go dark quickly before she was tucked under a tree root never to be seen again. There she could rest and soften. She didn’t realize she was swaying back and forth staring out to the tangled banks until Darla tapped her on the knee. “Octavia. Honey. Octavia.”

Octavia moved her head to shake herself back to the surface. “I brought my Auntie here once.”

“Your what?”

“My Auntie.” Octavia’s Auntie June was her favorite. She pictured her panicked face as it turned purple, the eyes rolled white into her skull, and thought of the rubbery breakfast sausage simmering in her cast iron skillet that morning.

“You call her Auntie?”

Octavia’s stare moved to her toes in their orthopedic sandals. “Is that not normal?” Her toes looked like the sausage that lodged in Auntie’s throat.

“How old are you?”

Octavia tried to smile. “I don’t have to answer that.”

The tour guide slowed the motor to a swashy stop and grinned. “You see that there. That’s a rare wild American Croc.”

Octavia’s heart skipped as she imagined summoning a moment of strength to leap from the boat and meet the toothy beast. But that was no reptile bobbing in the water, no crocodile—not even a small alligator. It was nothing but a green camouflaged sandal, no doubt tied to a fishing line and held to the swamp’s bottom by a rock or a brick. Her eyes moved the back of Darla’s head, giving her another idea.

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